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Steel with unforgiving mercy
Metal grinding into your bone
Come to reap what you have sown
The fight has been brought home

Hate againt the savior of all
Why do you hesitate and stall
Do you fear the master of man
For what he has in his plan

Look upon his kingdom in disdain
Just wanting to inflict pain
Your the opressor of the glory
The antaganist in a love story

Only feelings of malice and hate
On the edge of anger and irate
The tension pulses and radiates
If only you could make it abate
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Well i just had an idea sparked..so I wrote..and it has been awhile...so well here i hope you like it :)

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:iconsweetnut:
i radiate like the sun! lol jk... good job :)

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Good bye
:iconcletusjackson:
well i'm not sure tif that is a good or a bad thing but thank you

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
:iconcletusjackson:
thank you...and you said a word so that means something ;) if you remember the talk we had ...lol

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
:iconkurohyochan:
Wow...You never, EVER cease to amaze me with your words...*blinks* Beautifully put. <3
:iconcletusjackson:
eh..thank you ..I have my moments..;)...thats all the self praise you'll get outta me about my own work... :)..thanks ;)

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
:iconkurohyochan:
Hehe. Better than nothing. I'll have to keep working on you.
:icontorr-ture:
...*Hits with a mallet.* Thus ends my advanced critique.

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"That is because the English language is my BITCH, and I bend it to my wishes accordingly..." -T
:iconcletusjackson:
yea you try and crack shell like so many others...many many others...see how far you can crack it...;)

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw

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