My sin, it brings me down again
My life, so full of pain and strife
My love, something I'll never reach
My thought, Something you cannot teach
Now or Never, it's my time to decide
In life the wave on which we ride
Can't stop this mountain moving on
Every thought of mine is gone
Wish there was more to life then this
Just more then to merely exist
The Dance for the puppet master is on
We have less brain then brawn













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For all the pain in the world...you know none until you take my hand.
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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
"Now or Never, it's my time to decide
In life the wave on which we ride
Can't stop this mountain moving on
Every thought of mine is gone
Wish there was more to life then this
Just more then to merely exist
The Dance for the puppet master is on
We have less brain then brawn"
That is absolutely what I've been looking for out of you. Thank you. It could use a FEW (VERY FEW) punctuation additions. (Maybe one or two). But I am so glad you've displayed this smoothness, this flow. Great job.
I edited your spelling of "brawn" and "exist" btw.
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Always test thy faith.
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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
Seriously I had already thought that.
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Always test thy faith.
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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
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Always test thy faith.
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"Life isn't about waiting for a storm to pass, its about learning to dance in the rain."
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