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Scared Of The Dark? by ~CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson:



All alone in the darkness
Left without even a kiss
Without somebody to hold
Who knew darkness was so cold

It's grip tightens on my mind
My vision suffocated, now blind
I'm falling alone in the dark
Left without love or it's spark

I can't escape it's mighty grasp
Holding me down like a steel clasp
I struggle to not be scared
But I'm left alone, my feelings bared
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This is for :iconeinnobztron: "Afraid of the Dark" Contest...what do you think?

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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
Beautiful comparisions. It flows very well and the visual statements work to your advantage. Good luck!

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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder :crazy:
:rose::butterflytwo:

Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
:iconcletusjackson:
Ahh thank you...your input is always valued...espiecally such an important member of my friends

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
:iconkurohyochan:
Very nice! Love the feeligs portrayed in this. It brings me back to when I used to be afraid of the dark. :clap: Very nice.
:iconmodsoul123:
Words flow great. i really like this.

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Owned by a Penguin!

Jesus Freak and way proud of it!
:iconcletusjackson:
CJ thanks you...lol ;) ...third person...

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
:iconcletusjackson:
I cannot thank you enough..and for the fav as well :)

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
:iconinnocencedied2nite:
:blushes: geee thanks, really! same back to you!

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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder :crazy:
:rose::butterflytwo:

Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
:iconcletusjackson:
Ah tis no problem...I know my friends and your one...no need to thank me...friends are friends and thats all the thanks i need

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
:iconblaydrix:
Nice. That's all I have to say.

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I'll admit it. I'm a Gleek.
:iconcletusjackson:
lol. :) Thank you

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw

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