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Your Not Alone by =CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson:

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Your words make me smile
Your eloquence and style
Are designed to bring cheer
Every time you call me dear

I can't let you be sad for long
You're a great person and strong
Your heart and mind are unmatched
All your fear and doubt are dispatched

You must rise above your sadness
Keep on reaching for the bliss
Remember that people like me exist
Even when the bad memories persist

I will always be your friend
I will always have time to lend
For a person as nice as you
I hope you see that I care too
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OK this is another for my friend Kyaku22 :iconkyaku22: ...she is sad and I cheer up...what do you guys think...and besides the Grammar error of Your and you're any other mistakes?

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~Blaydrix:iconBlaydrix: Apr 23, 2008, 6:36:27 PM
I like this one.

Critique time:

"I can't let to be sad for long" - WTF fix

Learn the difference between "Your" and "You're"
There is a difference. "Your" is possessive while "You're" means "You are."

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~Blaydrix:iconBlaydrix: Apr 23, 2008, 6:37:06 PM
Bah, just noticed your comment about the Your You're error. Never mind.

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=CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson: Apr 23, 2008, 6:38:59 PM
yea i know the difference but i hate grammar...lol...of course who does like it..and damn ithought i wouldn't have eroors beside the yours'

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
=CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson: Apr 23, 2008, 6:40:55 PM
lol..see...i know i screwed them up...i always do...so i figured i might as well make it known ahead of time...lol...and i fixed that line...lol :)

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
~Blaydrix:iconBlaydrix: Apr 23, 2008, 6:41:17 PM
I LIEK IT LOL

well, not really, but I follow it religiously :3

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~Blaydrix:iconBlaydrix: Apr 23, 2008, 6:42:14 PM
ah, good.

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=CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson: Apr 23, 2008, 6:42:19 PM
Blah then..I hate grammar...go figure since i'm a writer of sorts...lol

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
~Blaydrix:iconBlaydrix: Apr 23, 2008, 6:42:59 PM
lol irony

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=CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson: Apr 23, 2008, 6:47:16 PM
That is the life of most writers...if i can be called that

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One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't.
-George Bernard Shaw
~Blaydrix:iconBlaydrix: Apr 23, 2008, 6:50:59 PM
you can be called a poet. a good one at that. then again, i don't read a lot of poetry, and I don't understand most of it anyway, so I don't really know if you rank as a good poet, lol

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