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Your words make me smile
Your eloquence and style
Are designed to bring cheer
Every time you call me dear

I can't let you be sad for long
You're a great person and strong
Your heart and mind are unmatched
All your fear and doubt are dispatched

You must rise above your sadness
Keep on reaching for the bliss
Remember that people like me exist
Even when the bad memories persist

I will always be your friend
I will always have time to lend
For a person as nice as you
I hope you see that I care too
OK this is another for my friend Kyaku22 :iconkyaku22: ...she is sad and I cheer up...what do you guys think...and besides the Grammar error of Your and you're any other mistakes?

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crazymorals Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009   Traditional Artist
Awesome work man.
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CletusJackson Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009
thanks
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frozenblackroses Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008
great job!
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CletusJackson Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008
Thank you :)
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frozenblackroses Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008
your welcome :]
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einnobztron Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008  Student Writer
awww! I like it.
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CletusJackson Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008
:) thanks
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einnobztron Featured By Owner May 1, 2008  Student Writer
any time
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Xhinkaiyu Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice, I like it a lot. Each one of those sections seems like they'd be perfect for professional greeting cards, better perhaps. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading through it, it seems like one of your more longer poems. Keep'em coming!
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CletusJackson Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2008
Thank you your critiques always seem in depth...very much appreciated
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